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  1. GRADE 9 NON-FICTION COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS

    Grade 9 NON-FICTION COMPARISON ANALYSIS
    2 Lessons
  2. GRADE 9 LIVE MODELLING SESSIONS
    MINDSET & PROBLEM-SOLVING
    3 Lessons
  3. SESSION 2: HEALTH AND LANG P1 (FICTION) TIMING
    3 Lessons
  4. SESSION 5: HOW TO ANSWER THE 'EVALUATION' QUESTION
    4 Lessons
  5. Grade 9 TRANSACTIONAL WRITING
    5 Lessons
  6. Grade 9 ANALYSIS OF LANGUAGE
    2 Lessons
  7. SESSION 7: HOW TO USE THE MODEL ANSWERS IN THE LIBRARY TO SCORE A GRADE 9
    9 Lessons
  8. SESSION 8: POETIC FORMS - GRADE 9 TECHNIQUES
    4 Lessons
  9. SESSION 9: LITERATURE PAPER 1 EXAM PREP
    31 Lessons
  10. SESSION 10: UNSEEN POETRY
    26 Lessons
  11. SESSION 12: STRUCTURE AND EVALUATION FOR LANGUAGE
    4 Lessons
  12. SESSION 13: LANGUAGE PAPER 2
    12 Lessons
  13. HOW TO MARK YOURSELF LIKE AN EXAMINER
    1 Lesson
  14. CLOSE ANALYSIS & EFFECTS
    HOW TO ANALYSE CLOSELY FOR GRADE 9
    2 Lessons
  15. EFFECTS OF AUTHOR'S METHODS: Grade 9 Techniques
    6 Lessons
  16. GRADE 9 PARAGRAPHS
    TTECEA PARAGRPAHS: CONVERTING A GRADE 6 ESSAY PARAGRAPH TO GRADE 9
    3 Lessons
  17. COMPLEX SENTENCES FOR GRADE 9
    COMPLEX SENTENCES FOR A GRADE 9
    2 Lessons
  18. CREATIVE WRITING
    WRITING A GRADE 9 STORY WITH CHATGPT
    2 Lessons
  19. CREATIVE WRITING
    1 Lesson
  20. PLOT STRUCTURE
    1 Lesson
  21. EXAM PREPARATION
    EXAM PREPARATION
    3 Lessons
  22. LANGUAGE PAPER 1
    LANGUAGE PAPER 1 WALKTHROUGH
    3 Lessons
  23. INTERVIEWS
    LIVE INTERVIEWS WITH TOP-LEVEL STUDENTS
    3 Lessons
  24. 1:1 Recordings
    1. 1:1 WITH INAYAH: Macbeth: Critical Views of Witches: Conceptualisation: Live Model Answer
    4 Lessons
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Read the opening paragraph response and then complete the exercise that follows.

  1. Read the 100% response and then, in the comments section, list three more verbs that indicate the effects of the authors’ techniques. You do not need to write full sentences for this exercise; you may simply list your answers.
  2. You can download our GCSE English Analysis Mastery Toolkit at the bottom of this video or in the materials tab above.

The 100% Response

Joe Moran begins the extract with a short simple sentence that establishes a basic fact about his sentence-writing routine: ‘First I write a sentence.’ Additionally, the basic structure of this opening sentence emphasises the first step in writing, that is to simply to write a sentence, rather than spending time thinking about what to write. This suggests that he does not wait for the perfect sentence to come into his head; he just needs ‘a tickle of an idea for how the words might come together.’ As the paragraph develops, he utilises a variety of short, long, simple and more complex sentences to reflect the variety of methods he uses to write, such as, ‘…sound out the sentence… tap it on my keyboard… say it out aloud…’


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